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:iconbittersweet108:
great picture :clap: I really like the colors :)

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:iconesozete:
great shot i love the light!

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i really like the light here toby, but to me the composition could be better, you have a lot of dead space to the upper left of the image, the small rock that dissects the frame at the bottom could be got rid of and i suggest cropping off the left hand side to reduce that negative space and draw the viewers to the end of the groins (focal point)...i presume you were unable to shoot more to the right?
:icontobyedwards:
Thanks for the critique Steve.
I think the composition is fine, save for the top left as you say. I'm not sure cropping in and chopping up the rocks would work that well to be honest. I think the line of the rocks draws you towards the focal point, and that was the idea behind the composition.

Shooting more to the right, and moving left might have improved the shot though in hindsight.
:iconalexwise:
Just beautiful.

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:iconlori77:
Beautiful colors, wonderful composition. Well done!
:iconjusteline:
Lovely lighting, lovely place, excellent composition!

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:iconalex37:
Very nice Toby. Steve doesnt know what he's on about
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